hot smell of almost summer
meadows heat up
near creeks
senses sent
swiftly downstream
into floodgates: memories
wild roses, ferns and honeysuckle
running through tall grasses
looking for leapfrogs, toads, snakes and salamanders
recalling: mud patches, bee stings
and stream beds
the great heron lifts up from
the river
flying further away
dreaming on a breeze filled
with the aroma of
childhood
summers spent
smelling
the quiet dark beauty, earth






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June 11, 2007 at 2:21 pm
Crafty Green Poet
very atmospheric, especially the first line!
June 12, 2007 at 10:53 pm
birdsword
thanks, I was working hard at writing from a sense of smell-it is hard to do…
June 17, 2007 at 1:00 am
Scott
I definitely got that sensation of smell, but also wonderful imagery.
June 18, 2007 at 11:45 pm
birdsword
thanks so much Scott. as always – I appreciate the feedback
June 28, 2007 at 4:40 pm
desert rat
Smells, images, and just the feeling of being outside in the country in the summer – well captured.