Persimmon
You are a funny looking fruit, hard sleek orange shell with a tomato like top round and dented.
I have yet to eat a ripe one, always the taste is the same.
I open you up-forgetting what the inside is like
because after the first bite
all I recall is my mouth sucked dry by your vacuum like powers
depleted of all liquid from my throat
what gifted taste remains, is a dry cotton acid
I gag, and damn myself again, for being tempted by your name.
The Taste of Love
warmed by the sun on our caribbean honeymoon-I will never forget the taste of papaya at breakfast under a palm tree canopy overlooking the sea- milky black caviar seeds filled the curved center of hot sweet orange flesh
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pluots and nectarines
my shirts stained
with your summer plump juiciness




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December 10, 2007 at 3:00 am
Linda Jacobs
These seem to work really well in the longer line length. The shape is almost like the size of the fruit!
December 12, 2007 at 2:07 am
UL
Mmm papayas, been a long time since I ate one of them, used to have a tree in our backyard growing up, …you have desribed it well… thank you.
December 12, 2007 at 4:32 am
...deb
Delightful word & imagery combinations. I share your preferences, too.
December 12, 2007 at 9:26 am
Crafty Green Poet
Excellent descriptions. I loved papayas when i lived in Malawi and we had a papaya tree outside the house.
December 13, 2007 at 8:16 am
qazse
“I gag, and damn myself again, for being tempted by your name.” Wonderful.
December 13, 2007 at 6:47 pm
blackeyedsusan
very nice. I’m partial to food and romance. The first one though, strikes me for a metaphor for relationship and one that is enticing but not completely romantic. How many times have I been sucked in? I’m not telling. lol
December 13, 2007 at 8:01 pm
birdsword
thanks everyone, I appreciate the feedback!